When You Touched Me

by Keelywolfe

 




And now listen to me in turn. You have touched me more profoundly than I thought even you could have touched me - my heart was full when you came here today. Henceforward I am yours for everything...

-Elizabeth Barrett Browning

 



There was something that was just disconcerting about being completely naked in a dark room, Obi-Wan decided, shifting awkwardly on the pillow he was kneeling on. It wasn't that he was uncomfortable with his body or with being nude. It just felt very...odd.

At least it wasn't cold.

Stifling the urge to squirm in his discomfort, Obi-Wan tried to focus his attention back to what he was supposed to be doing; blanking his mind and concentrating on his sense of touch. He focused on the velvety pillow beneath his knees, the light brush of the air swirling around him. Releasing his other senses he allowed only the awareness of touch.

His mind wasn't being very cooperative though. Instead of becoming comfortably empty of thought, it instead kept drifting away, back to the day a few weeks before when Qui-Gon had told him that it was time for him to undergo this trial.

Actually, it had started the night before that, Obi-Wan thought. It had been late in the evening and he and Qui-Gon had been talking. Well, he had been talking anyway, Obi-Wan recalled somewhat ruefully, but his master had been listened to him, with an expression that had looked suspiciously like amusement.

He'd been telling his master forlornly about his last astrophysics exam when he'd recalled, rather disgustedly, how oddly some of the other padawans were acting around him lately. A few of them had taken to sighing and giggling whenever he walked past, whispering to each other behind their hands.

It made him feel strange and actually very uncomfortable, wondering what they were talking about. But when he told his master about it, Qui-Gon had just looked up from whatever he had been reading and smiled.

"It's nothing for you to be worried about, Obi-Wan, I'm sure," Qui-Gon had said, and when Obi-Wan still looked doubtful, he continued, gently, "You're getting quite handsome, padawan, and your age mates are probably just starting to notice it. It's nothing for you to be concerned about. Besides," he'd added, teasingly, "When you are old and decrepit like your master is you will be longing for the days of people giggling over you."

Suddenly Qui-Gon had frowned, just a little, and Obi-Wan's playful response had died on his lips. He'd sat there at his master's feet uncertainly and blinked in surprise when Qui-Gon cupped his chin in one large hand, tipping his face up. His master had studied his face for a long moment, a thoughtful expression replacing the frown. Then even that melted into a reassuring smile and Qui-Gon had let go of him, ruffled his hair and sent him to bed.

He had gone, hesitantly, his own hand pressed to his cheek as he briefly wondered what it was that Qui-Gon had been looking for. But the older man had returned to his reading, and it was rude to question a master anyway, so Obi-Wan had gone to bed as he had been told, lying awake and wondering.

The next morning at breakfast Qui-Gon had told him, offhandedly, that it was time for Obi-Wan to undergo this ritual. Obi-Wan had said nothing at the time, only nodded and tried to appear calm even as he fought to control the bright burst of panic that swept through him at the thought. It was only another trial like all the others, nothing to worry about, certainly nothing to be afraid of.

But it wasn't like all the other trials, not at all. This trial was far different than any other he had gone through and Obi-Wan couldn't control the tiny shiver that went through him.

A large hand had touched his shoulder and jerked him from his thoughts. "Obi-Wan, this ritual is nothing for you to be afraid of and it's for your benefit that you go through it." Qui-Gon smiled then, slightly, "I've just become aware that you are growing up and you are getting quite handsome." His expression turned serious as he continued, "And that's all fine and good but beauty is a dangerous thing for a Jedi and it brings its fair share of problems. I know you are still young yet, but it's best if you learn how to deal with those problems now, before..." He had hesitated, and then said firmly, "Before it becomes an issue."

There had been shadows in Qui-Gon's eyes as he spoke and Obi-Wan shivered at the memory, his chest tight as he wondered just how well Qui-Gon knew of those problems.

And now he was here, waiting.

He'd spent all day meditating to prepare for this, although really it hadn't been necessary. The trial itself wasn't that difficult. All he had to do was absorb it, lock the memory into his mind, where it could be retrieved later. That was easily done, Obi-Wan had been doing such things since he was much younger.

It was the knowledge of -why- he was doing this that was difficult for him. He had to make a pleasant memory of touch, one of pleasure, to be saved and used against one of pain. Just in case. It was the 'just in case' that made him nervous.

And that wasn't completely true either, Obi-Wan admitted. His nervousness had gotten steadily worse since the two senior padawans had retrieved him from his room that morning to prepare him for this ritual. Their solemn expressions and silence had done nothing to ease his growing anxiety over this; neither of them had spoken a word to him. And Qui-Gon hadn't mentioned the ritual since that morning weeks before.

It was the unknown that was bothering Obi-Wan, so much unknown. He had a vague idea of what the ritual entailed, only what was told in his initiate classes. He'd tried to research it on his own only to find the texts were as vague as his class and asking Qui-Gon had been out of the question. 

Now it was too late. He was going to find out first hand about this ritual. The other padawans who had taken him away that morning had bathed him thoroughly, to Obi-Wan's blushing shame, and then taken him to mediate. Then they had led him here, stripped him of his clothes and left him, closing the door softly behind them and casting Obi-Wan in shadows, leaving him alone in the room.

It didn't have to be Qui-Gon; he knew that much. If Qui-Gon didn't feel that he could do this he was well within his right to ask another to take his place. It could be anyone that Qui-Gon deemed appropriate, anyone at all.

That thought only made his nervousness worse and now it was colored with just a touch of fear. He decided it might be better not to think of it. Now was the time to concentrate on the present, on what he was supposed to be doing. Touch, and only touch. There was nothing more.

Awareness washed over him and Obi-Wan tensed. There, someone else was in the room with him. Obi-Wan took a deep breath and released it, struggling to push his fear away. He trusted Qui-Gon, knew that no matter who it was they would be gentle and make this as pleasant as possible. That was the point of the ritual, after all. He trusted his master but all he could think of was that it could be anyone, anyone and soon they were going to...

Touch him. Large, warm hands settled on Obi-Wan's bare shoulders, squeezing lightly and Obi-Wan felt himself trembling, a bright flare of panic rushing through him and he nearly bolted, nearly ran from that touch and from the unknown.

And then he relaxed, tension easing. Warm hands, *familiar* hands and Obi-Wan scolded himself silently for his doubt. He did trust his master, without question, certainly trusted him enough for this. Hands were sliding down the smooth skin of his back, rubbing soothingly and Obi-Wan relaxed further underneath those hands, hands that had guided him through so many things, had taught him so much. And now those well- known and much-loved hands were touching him so gently and Obi-Wan felt as if he could barely breath.

He felt Qui-Gon move to kneel behind him, a warm, comforting presence and it was all he could do not to lean back against his master and simply bask in that feeling. But he remained still, determined to go through this ritual properly.

Those reassuring hands left him then and Obi-Wan had to bite back a protest. Only touch, he reminded himself, no sound, and immediately broke that rule with a soft sigh as Qui-Gon's hands returned, slick now with something oily and warm. He rubbed Obi-Wan's shoulders, thumbs digging into the tense muscles and Obi-Wan sighed again, fighting the urge to simply melt into the floor.

The touch lightened as it drifted lower, long fingers gently stroking over his slim hips and Obi-Wan's breathing quickened, his skin prickling with nerves. No one had really told him what was going to happen, not in so many details, but he knew. He knew the purpose of the ritual; it was a precaution, just in case, just in case...

A pleasant memory made even the unthinkable more bearable.

One hand at the small of his back urged him to lean forward and Obi-Wan did, resting his weight on his elbows as that hand slid downward, very lightly, over his backside. The sensation of coarse hair abrading the sensitive skin there made Obi-Wan blink as he realized Qui-Gon was rubbing his cheek against his hip. Was this part of the ritual...? And then Qui-Gon's fingers slid down the cleft of his buttocks to the small pucker hidden between the smooth cheeks.

He hissed softly as one finger pressed just inside, easing its way into his body. Qui-Gon was pressing gentle kisses against his skin, moving upward to nuzzle the small of his back and Obi-Wan nearly sobbed aloud. Was this what he had been afraid of? These gentle touches?

Qui-Gon's free hand slid around his hip to caress his belly with teasing fingers before his hand slid lower, capturing his padawan's erection in a gentle grasp. Obi-Wan had to bite his lip to keep from crying out, only touch he reminded himself desperately, there was to be no sound but a low whimper escaped him anyway as Qui-Gon's invading finger slid deeply inside him at the same moment.

Squirming just a little, Obi-Wan lowered his head to his folded arms, resting his forehead on them. It didn't really hurt, felt odd more than anything but then that finger brushed something inside of him that made him gasp in surprise before he could stifle it. Experimentally, Obi-Wan rocked backwards and was rewarded with another flash of pleasure. The dual sensations of the warm hand on his cock and the finger inside him was a kind of bliss that Obi-Wan had never imagined and had he really thought that this trial was simply something to be endured?

The finger withdrew despite Obi-Wan's wordless protest only to be replaced by two fingers and that was more difficult, his body resisted. Qui-Gon pulled back briefly and Obi-Wan felt the slickness of oil trickling down his backside before those fingers returned, more insistently this time and his body open reluctantly to their invasion. Obi-Wan bit his lip, trying to relax. It didn't really hurt but it wasn't exactly comfortable either. Slowly, the movement became easier, Qui-Gon's fingers sliding in and out of him without difficulty.

They pulled away yet again and this time they were replaced by something large, hotter, a blunt pressure against his anus. Qui-Gon's hands moved to Obi-Wan's hips, holding him still as he pressed forward. A soft whimper escaped Obi-Wan in spite of himself. He'd expected this to hurt somewhat, he wasn't -that- naïve but this was worse than he'd expected, this thickness filling him. He tried to pull away, to ease the pressure but the grasp on his hips was firm, holding him tightly as Qui-Gon surged forward in one deep thrust before he stilled completely.

Obi-Wan cried out, knew that he wasn't supposed to but he couldn't help it. He could taste salt and realized that he was crying, a feeling of betrayal growing in him even as he shuddered with pain. Warmth settled along his back as Qui-Gon stretched out over him. The movement rocked both their hips and Obi-Wan whimpered softly, wanting to flinch away from the touch but unable to, oh it hurt it really, really hurt...

"Shhh." Breathed ever so softly against his ear, warm lips slid over his cheek, tasting his tears. The hands that had been holding him still eased their grip, one hand gently petting Obi-Wan's hip, urging him to relax while the other slid around again to Obi-Wan's lax penis. His erection had faded at the pain but gentle fingers coaxed it back again.

Lips slid back to Obi-Wan's ear and a soft tongue traced the delicate curves while Qui-Gon's hands still stroked him, gently, and Obi-Wan found himself relaxing under the careful touches, the pain easing. Actually, it wasn't really that bad now and Obi-Wan experimentally clenched his muscles around the flesh that was inside him, heard Qui- Gon's startled gasp in response.

Ever so slowly, carefully, Qui-Gon drew back before he pressed inside again and hesitated, as if watching for any sign of pain. It did hurt, a little, but it felt strangely good too and Obi-Wan leaned back into the gentle thrusts.

His master paused briefly just as it was starting to actually feel really good and Obi-Wan could have screamed in protest. Instead he waited, panting and still while Qui-Gon shifted backwards a bit, pulling Obi-Wan with him until they were both on their knees. Obi-Wan moaned his approval of this new position. It felt so much deeper and it hurt but it was right -there-, right where he needed it and Qui-Gon rocked them together, harder than before as he thrust upward into his padawan's willing body.

They moved together, bodies sweat slick and the silent darkness of the room was interrupted only by their broken gasps and soft sounds of pleasure. Strong arms wrapped around Obi-Wan as his master thrust upward, hard, muffling cries against the boy's neck and Obi-Wan felt as if he was enveloped in his master, nothing more than an extension of Qui-Gon and his pleasure. There was nothing but the heat and the darkness and the sweet growing pressure at the base of his stomach.

Obi-Wan threw his head back against Qui-Gon's chest, his own hands clenching Qui-Gon's arms painfully hard. He couldn't move, he was trapped in Qui-Gon's embrace but it didn't matter because Qui-Gon moved the both of them. There was something happening, something, and it was so close, so unbelievably wonderful and Obi-Wan choked on a scream, biting his lip as he came, spilling over Qui-Gon's stroking hand.

A wash of incredible pleasure swept over him and dimly heard himself crying out, slumping backwards against Qui-Gon. His master clutched him closer, his grip painfully hard as the older man shuddered against him in his own completion and for a moment Obi-Wan could feel the shaft inside him straining, a pulsing warmth inside him. And then Qui-Gon relaxed profoundly, his grip loosening enough for Obi-Wan to draw a deep breath into his starving lungs.

Shifting, Qui-Gon carefully withdrew, pulling a soft hiss from Obi-Wan. Now that it was over Obi-Wan could feel his growing soreness and he wondered, not without a touch of amusement, how he was going to sit for the next week.

Qui-Gon moved to pull his padawan into his arms and Obi-Wan went, unresisting. It felt almost too good to be in this familiar embrace and he sank into the warm comfort that his master's arms offered. It hadn't been an awful experience; in fact it had been something akin to wonderful. But suddenly all Obi-Wan could think of was why they had done this. Not out of love or any kind of affection but out of duty, to help Obi-Wan on the off chance he was ever...assaulted.

No. He couldn't hide from this, even in his thoughts. It was a fear that needed to be faced. The boy took a deep breath and forced himself to think it. In case he was ever raped, he would be able to sink himself into this memory and take himself away from pain and humiliation.

To his embarrassed shock Obi-Wan realized that he was crying, drops of wetness sliding down his cheeks to fall on Qui-Gon's bare chest. He tried to pull away, swiping at his cheeks with the back of his hand but the arms around him tightened slightly, refusing to release him. Instead, Qui-Gon held him closely, rocking him gently as if he was only a child. Vaguely feeling as if he should pull away and not allow Qui- Gon to comfort him like this, Obi-Wan instead snuggled closer, feeling safer here in his master's arms than anywhere else he had ever been in his admittedly short life.

"Padawan. My Obi-Wan," whispered so softly that for a moment Obi-Wan thought he had imagined it. A little shocked, he tilted his head to look upward at his master even though there wasn't enough light to see. They weren't supposed to speak, at all. This was supposed to be about touch...the soft pressure of lips on his own blanked Obi-Wan's mind.

They weren't supposed to do this either, he thought hazily, but he responded anyway, shyly flicking his tongue against Qui-Gon's lips. His master pulled back, scattering gentle kisses over Obi-Wan's face and the boy smiled, a bit senselessly. They weren't supposed to do this, he was supposed to meditate now, implant this in his mind but Qui-Gon's lips were gentle and warm and very wonderful.

Not supposed to, but when had Qui-Gon ever done what he was supposed to do? Obi-Wan gave into it, kissing his master back just like they weren't supposed to do, adding this sweetness and warmth to his memories. They could stay like this, he decided, just a little bit longer.
 

-finis--  

 

Comments and questions to:  bsp; mailto:keelywolfe@gmail.com

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