The Listener's Power

by Keelywolfe

 


Hey. It's about time you got here; glad you finally decided to show up. Want something to drink? No? Well, if you change your mind, just say so.

Anyway, as long as you're here, let me tell you a story. What? No, I'm not going to preach some kind of moral message to you. That's not what I do.  It's just a story, nothing more. Of course, if I am going to be the storyteller then you have to be the listener, and that job is just as important as mine. Maybe more.

Yeah, I know you didn't come here expecting to do work, but no one made you come and no one is going to make you stay. That's one of the powers of the listeners, you know. You can get up and leave any time you want, and there isn't anything the storyteller can do about it. We're powerless creatures, the tellers. We hold lives in our hands that we can mold like so much clay, grant every wish or birth every nightmare into gruesome reality. But it's a false power, a glamour, the lives we control are as insubstantial as the stuff of any fantasy. A dream.

But where was I?

Ah, yes. A story.

I know a lot of stories, most people do. I know about Alice's venture down the rabbit hole, and I know Hamlet's insanity, although not whether it was feigned or real. I know the true story of Cinderella, and of Red Riding Hood, not the children's tales but ones of blood that taught of the realities of the world through fear. I know those stories.

But they aren't mine.

This story is my story.

Once upon a time, (because all the greatest stories begin that way), there was a young man. He wasn't special, not to himself, and not to the world. Later in his life, he might do a few things that were special, for someone, someplace, but in the end he was just a human, like the rest of us.

He lived in a two-bedroom apartment, alone if you didn't count the cat, worked a steady nine-to-five, Monday through Friday, and one Saturday a month. Once or twice a week he would call his mother and carefully fend off her questions about when he was going to settle down with a nice girl, because he hadn't told her that he was homosexual. He hadn't told anyone, really, not out of any true sense of shame, but because he really didn't see that it was anyone else's business except his own. Perhaps it was his mother's business too, and he swore once or twice a week that he was going to sit down and just tell her, although he never did.

Sometimes on the weekends he'd go out to the clubs, simply because that is what single people do, and he'd sit at the bar and sip a rum and coke, watching the other people dance.

One night, as he was sitting, lifting his second drink to his lips, he saw another man sitting at the other end of the bar, as unremarkable as himself. Dark brown hair, dark brown eyes, the slightest hint of a pot belly that all men seemed to gain as they aged, men that sat in bars on the weekends, anyway.

For only the briefest of moments, their eyes met, and suddenly, looking into ordinary brown eyes, he saw the entirety of the night laid out before him. The entirety of his life.

They would talk together, the careful, almost nervous, talk of two people who don't know each other very well, an elaborate dance that we are taught from the moment our child's lips begin to form words. Treading lightly around certain subjects until we discover how the other feels about it. Waltzing through easy topics like music and movies, switching to ballet, on Pointe for the subjects of religion and politics.

But he could see that the dance with this man would be as if they had been practicing it together their entire lives. He could be Ginger Rogers to his Fred Astaire and the giddy silliness of the thought almost makes him laugh.

For the first time in his life, he would go home with someone without the nervous butterflies in his stomach threatening to choke him, without that little doubtful voice in the back of his head wondering if this would be like the last one, or the one before that, the one before that, and would he go home again feeling, if not dirty, then slightly used, and he'd sit down to a microwave dinner that was still frozen in the center, alone, and a bowl of popcorn from the same-said microwave, to watch old movies until he fell asleep on his sofa.

This time, he would stay the entire night instead of creeping out guiltily with the only light coming from the bright green numbers of a strange alarm clock, numbers that watched him accusingly as he slipped out the door. He would stay the night, and they would make love until they were both exhausted, beyond exhausted, the heady, sweaty, scent and sense of their own bodies driving them until the thought of orgasm was almost painful.

In the morning the man with brown hair and brown eyes would make pancakes, not great pancakes but good ones, and too-crisp bacon that he would eat anyway, before they'd shower together, last night's eagerness engulfing them again until much later they'd both call in sick to work, trying to sound ill when inside they were struggling with laughter.

A whirlwind romance, and only a few weeks later they'd move in together, because it felt like they were more than lovers. It felt like they'd known each other since the moment of their births, and that knowing, that simple easiness together would never fade, even when brown hair had become more gray than brown, even when his mother passed away, never realizing that her son was living with another man, and he had taken over bacon duty years before because he liked it more chewy than burnt.

He looked into those brown eyes and saw happiness.

Then the man with brown hair and eyes looked away and the moment was broken, leaving him alone again in a smoky bar, loud music that tried and failed to be subtly about fucking thrummed painfully in his ears. In one swallow he finished his drink, setting the glass carefully on the bar. He tucked a dollar bill beneath it almost absently before he stood and walked out into the cooler night air, inhaling deeply to clear his lungs of cigarette smoke as he walked to his car and went home to his microwave dinner and popcorn.

He never saw the brown haired and eyed man again, although he did dream about him, sometimes, waking in the morning with the memory, or perhaps the dream of a memory already fading before he got up and, for no reason that he knew of, cooked pancakes and bacon, chewy not burnt.


There, that story was mine. Not a great story perhaps, but greatness isn't determined by the story or the teller, only the listener, another power gifted to you. Perhaps you didn't like my story, but that's all right. A storyteller isn't always looking for approval, only a listener, and you did that job just fine.

Still, I have to say I'm sorry if you didn't like my story, and I am sorry, but I did so want to tell you a story and this was the only one I knew.

What? The man in the story? But why are you worried about him? He was only a dream, remember? Nothing more than a figment of my imagination and now, perhaps yours.

Years from now, maybe you'll think about him, wonder why he walked out of the bar without saying a word to the other man. You'll forget details, of course, about hair, and bacon, and somebody's mom. Perhaps you'll have nothing more than a vague recollection of some man, who did something someplace, and you won't recall when or where or why.

But maybe you'll think of him, some day or some year. Maybe. And that, my listener, is my power.

Goodnight.


-finis-

 

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